(#) chady 2007-06-01
I have read a good number of your stories and I like your writing a great deal. Your grammer is superb and your writing style is very easy to read. The only thing that bothers is the way characters act in the stories, in a great deal of your stories you have Harry doing something in public like the great hall or the shop as in this story and revealing who he is and generally just acting weird I guess. For someone who goes back in time to change the future One of the advantages is having the knowledge to yourself and being able to act without people noticing. It just makes me cringe where Harry bares his soul and does that in every story, I just wish to know why you do it like that