I kinda wish you would've said "Brendon's P.O.V." at the top. I was reading for a half a second and was like WTF. Then I realized that the P.O.V. had changed. LMAO. But AMAZING! I Looove the way you write him. The inner-conflicts were dead on and the backdrop of him speeding was really great. I really liked it! I love this story! I love ya Geets! Yay! Can't wait for more!!!!
Sincurrrrly yours,
Dee
Author's response
lmao, well, i did that for a reason :D i wanted to confuse people and make it less obvious! lol. "mission accomplished" :P thankyou, so much! yay, u liked the way i wrote him? happy dances love you! thanks. sincurrrly mine? hmm... Geets xx