(#) brad 2007-06-02
I think you're starting to get too cute on the muggle-isms again ... I guess we aren't supposed to take this story too seriously. Your earlier stories never had Daffy Ducks or ignorant DEs apparating onto the wings of aircraft at 30,000 feet.
I appreciate the psychoanalysis here, and in the last chapter, of Snape's basic flaw - his inability to perceive his actions in the war objectively and appraise their true value. Interesting.
"If you wait until the next, you cannot change, you can only be punished". Brrrr. I'm not religious, but that is one of the ... inducements ... to organised religion, isn't it? "Join us or be damned for all eternity"? It's a bare, harsh sentence that Luna utters here.