Review for Falter

Falter

(#) LOVELA 2007-06-02

This chapter had it all: humor, cute lovey dovey shit, kids being little shits, and DRAMA! I love the cliffhanger. Patrick better hurry up and save the day like the squishy hero that he is. Wonderful job!

Author's response

LOL I really did LOL when I saw squishy hero I was like WTF! LOL and it made my day so thank you so much I less than three you!!