(#) xhale 2007-06-03
Ha! This story can't be rated any higher.
I really have no clue where you're going with this story. I was REALLY enjoying it until the end of this chapter.
Right now, you're on the precipice. If you take the story one way, you might lose me as a reader. On the other hand, you could go any number of other ways and create a new story just as awesome as your last one.
All I can say is, I hope the next chapters come quick before I pull all my hair out!