(#) xhale 2007-06-03
Ha! This story can't be rated any higher.
I really have no clue where you're going with this story. I was REALLY enjoying it until the end of this chapter.
Right now, you're on the precipice. If you take the story one way, you might lose me as a reader. On the other hand, you could go any number of other ways and create a new story just as awesome as your last one.
All I can say is, I hope the next chapters come quick before I pull all my hair out!
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, as far as where the story is going, lets just say I'm up to chapter 8 and my stories have a way of writing themselves at a point. If I submit chapter 8 as written it'll change the rating of the story, so I'll pare it down a bit to keep the "R" rating. As far as characters, my biggest spoiler is in the synopsis. After that, surprises abound.
Hang in there!
N!