Review for Forgive me if I stutter from all of the clutter in my head

Forgive me if I stutter from all of the clutter in my head

(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-06-04

Aww yay! this story is so cute. Your a good writer. But there is one mistake, When he says "I'll be as gently as i can" I believe it is supposed to be gentle. Just thought I might point it out! Much love!