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uzumaki brothers
0 reviewsa universe where naruto is sent into an alternate time but has a brother and the original naruto that replaces him is someone else now read plz and review cause this is my very first story
-1MarySue
Uzumaki brothers
The day is any other day in konoha except the eerie feeling in the air about someone dying. It was also raining outside in a ferocious downpour. Everyone was inside listening to the rain. The silence of inactivity was broken when loud footsteps are heard. Sakura looked outside curious of who it was that is running.
The sound of someone running came closer and closer until it seemed the footsteps went by. Sakura continued to look for the source of the sound but nothing came. “That’s odd I could have sworn that someone was running.” Sakura said to herself. Sakura headed back into the training room that was in a secret department in the hokage’s building. The person who is running is now getting closer towards a flower shop that looked extremely close to the one Yamanaka Ino owned. Unknown to the person it was Ino who owned the shop.
Again just like Sakura, Ino looked outside to see who is outside during the storm. This time the person was seen. “Hey stop, why are you outside in this dangerous storm?” she yelled. Ino started chasing the person only to nearly run him over. She stopped to notice him crying then she noticed a bloodied up object in his hand. “Please…please save him.” He finally said in a choked voice. Then he fainted from blood loss himself.
“Where am I” asked Naruto to himself. “His heart has stopped…”said a voice in the background. “He might not make it put him in the hazard zone, where the hell is Tsunade!!” said another voice. After that name was said naruto opened his eyes and sat up. “Wait Tsunade is alive?!” He shouted. Shizunes’ eyes widened when she realized the boy is awake. “Are you alright? What happened, you were stabbed multiple times?” Shizune asked walking towards him. “Well, I feel like I’m alright but more importantly were is my brother?” Naruto asked impatiently. ‘Try to avoid question or else I have a feeling something will happen’ Shizune thought to herself.
“What did you mean by Tsunade is alive?” Shizune asked in an irritated manner. “Well last time I heard of her she died, and stop avoiding the question!” An angry naruto yelled as he started to get up to get out of the bed. “I died huh?” A person asked while who entering the room to hear narutos last remark. Narutos eyes widened then he fainted as if he’s seen a ghost. “Poor boy and I thought I was going to ask him about the incident” the person said while going towards the door.
Tsunade went to the hazard zone to try and save the other boys life only to find the boy living through the life saving procedures done to him but his condition is almost as bad as he was in the beginning. He was in a coma.
2 days later ooooooooo00000000oooooooooo
“Sakura what’s the report on the two boys?” Tsunade asked. Sakura flinched at the sudden question. “Well the coma patient seems to get worse by the day but the one that’s fine is still out cold, I wonder why though.” …. An explosion is heard near the hospital. Tsunade runs to the window only to find the boy who passed out after seeing her destroy three buildings. Her eyes widened greatly and gasped at what she saw. “It can’t be, there is only one person who has that power and he’s on a mission far away from here” she choked. “WHERE IS MY BROTHER” Yelled and outraged kyuubi cloaked naruto.
Well this is my first chapter of my first story sorry if it’s so short but I thought It would be a perfect spot to stop if you can please review, flame whatnot but I could really appreciate some constructive story making for future ideas. Ok oh and by the way im not going to update untill i get some reviews and im also write another story so it might even take longer
The day is any other day in konoha except the eerie feeling in the air about someone dying. It was also raining outside in a ferocious downpour. Everyone was inside listening to the rain. The silence of inactivity was broken when loud footsteps are heard. Sakura looked outside curious of who it was that is running.
The sound of someone running came closer and closer until it seemed the footsteps went by. Sakura continued to look for the source of the sound but nothing came. “That’s odd I could have sworn that someone was running.” Sakura said to herself. Sakura headed back into the training room that was in a secret department in the hokage’s building. The person who is running is now getting closer towards a flower shop that looked extremely close to the one Yamanaka Ino owned. Unknown to the person it was Ino who owned the shop.
Again just like Sakura, Ino looked outside to see who is outside during the storm. This time the person was seen. “Hey stop, why are you outside in this dangerous storm?” she yelled. Ino started chasing the person only to nearly run him over. She stopped to notice him crying then she noticed a bloodied up object in his hand. “Please…please save him.” He finally said in a choked voice. Then he fainted from blood loss himself.
“Where am I” asked Naruto to himself. “His heart has stopped…”said a voice in the background. “He might not make it put him in the hazard zone, where the hell is Tsunade!!” said another voice. After that name was said naruto opened his eyes and sat up. “Wait Tsunade is alive?!” He shouted. Shizunes’ eyes widened when she realized the boy is awake. “Are you alright? What happened, you were stabbed multiple times?” Shizune asked walking towards him. “Well, I feel like I’m alright but more importantly were is my brother?” Naruto asked impatiently. ‘Try to avoid question or else I have a feeling something will happen’ Shizune thought to herself.
“What did you mean by Tsunade is alive?” Shizune asked in an irritated manner. “Well last time I heard of her she died, and stop avoiding the question!” An angry naruto yelled as he started to get up to get out of the bed. “I died huh?” A person asked while who entering the room to hear narutos last remark. Narutos eyes widened then he fainted as if he’s seen a ghost. “Poor boy and I thought I was going to ask him about the incident” the person said while going towards the door.
Tsunade went to the hazard zone to try and save the other boys life only to find the boy living through the life saving procedures done to him but his condition is almost as bad as he was in the beginning. He was in a coma.
2 days later ooooooooo00000000oooooooooo
“Sakura what’s the report on the two boys?” Tsunade asked. Sakura flinched at the sudden question. “Well the coma patient seems to get worse by the day but the one that’s fine is still out cold, I wonder why though.” …. An explosion is heard near the hospital. Tsunade runs to the window only to find the boy who passed out after seeing her destroy three buildings. Her eyes widened greatly and gasped at what she saw. “It can’t be, there is only one person who has that power and he’s on a mission far away from here” she choked. “WHERE IS MY BROTHER” Yelled and outraged kyuubi cloaked naruto.
Well this is my first chapter of my first story sorry if it’s so short but I thought It would be a perfect spot to stop if you can please review, flame whatnot but I could really appreciate some constructive story making for future ideas. Ok oh and by the way im not going to update untill i get some reviews and im also write another story so it might even take longer
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