(#) linerlover 2008-07-01that was really beautiful.
i kinda dont know what else to say. i love the way you captured their relationship, broken, but still as loving as it is.
please do write more soon. there does sometimes seem a little bit of a lack in truly good authors on this site, but i reckon youve got something. not to mention youve figured out how to use apostrophes ans speech marks, not to mention capital letters... XD
(#) Sweetsugar 2008-07-13Wow. I'm speechless. And that isn't something that happens usually, lol.
I simply loved it, you really have a huge talent, you're an amazing writer. Everything felt so real, it was like being in Frank's head.
Congratulations hun! It was beautiful (even when I was hoping a happy ending as Jess, hehe)
(#) VenganzaDulce 2009-12-09Oohhh...that was epically awesome. I like how it was realistic and they didn't end up in each other's arms, because that's the way life sometimes is. You NEED to keep writing; you're really talented. More talented then a lot of people on this site (but keep that to yerself :P)
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