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The Other Woman
(#) stupid-little-lamb 2008-07-06
wow..
a little confusing, but still pretty good.
go monica, bash the cunt!!!
wheeeeeeeeee!!!
lol more soon.
stefi
xxAuthor's response
Sorry if its confusing. The story is already completed and people who have already read it never mentioned that. Plus I am not re-reading it to edit it because I am super busy, but I will make sure to edit the coming chapters to clear things up. IF there is something you want explained please let me know. Another thing is could be the formats that are diff from here and mibba. the POV's are future and the narroatrs voice is past. Thats maybe wants confusing you. I was able to write that on the title page on mibba, but not on here. I will do that now. So, sorry.
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