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• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) Dragen 2008-07-09

  Another great chapter mate, it was worth the wait, and I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
  
  I like the part with Dobby and Winky having their 'chat'. And I like the talk with Harry and Dobby about Dobby having sex with Winky and where he can do it. I like that Dobby like watching TV - lol.
  
  I do like that Harry flirted with Madam Rosmerta.
  
  I like the meeting with the Goblins.
  
  I like that Harry getting a wand holster, great idea.
  
  PLEASE update soon.

  Author's response

  I'm glad you enjoyed it, I try to write the sort of story I enjoy reading. I do have big plans for the Elves, although when we get to the school chapters, they may take a backseat for a while.
  
  With the wand holster, it made sense to put in the quirks and charms that is had. Although I try to temper the level of power available to the general public. if everyone could get a wand holster of ultimate doom, it would mess things up
  
  cheers
  dc1

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) jabarber69 2008-07-09

  Hey glad you updated, outstanding story! hope you can update sooner next time...and I do realize there is this thing called life and also there's this thingy called writer's block...if any of those two pop up, then called dobby and ask him to bring his beater's bat...

  Author's response

  I've had a shocker haven't I. Chapter 4 was really hard to write, but chapter 5 is well underway and is much easier. So I have my fingers crossed that I can post much quicker

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) ficbob 2008-07-09

  Good update
  and were you watching 'Princess Bride' by andy chance?
  Looking forward to more of the story and more summer pranks on Snape
  Thanks

  Author's response

  Thank you. I haven't watched it recently, though it is on my shelf. With regards to Snape, there won't really be pranks, rather proper action taken that will cause lots of pain. Revenge or justice are good words to use. There will be a prank war in later chapters, but it will be between friendlies
  
  cheers
  dc1

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) snowman 2008-07-09

  Awesome stuff.

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) jjracer24 2008-07-09

  Glad to see that you've continued this story. Keep up the updates. I’m really looking forward to writing your next installment.

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) slashslut 2008-07-09

  yea, welcome back strange! i love doby so im glad to see that he's such a big part of this story. looking forward to what comes next! read ya later:)

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) vasilis01 2008-07-09

  Excellent update. For a while i thought we lost you. Update soon.

  Author's response

  Thankyou. I have been a bit slack haven't I? the next chapter is well underway and should be good to go much sooner.
  
  cheers
  dc1

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) selenepotter 2008-07-10

  Great chapter! Uh . . . When does Winky get to sleep? Does Winky get a choice about who her husband is?

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) GinnyMyLove 2008-07-10

  I really enjoy Sneaky!Harry, I dont know that I have seen this exact character type used before. Angsty!Harry, Angry!Harry, Grey!Harry, but not Sneaky.
  
  I think anyone over the age of 12 realizes that although PS and CoS were written for 12 year olds, the rest of the story did not really "age" with the readers. By the time they are sixteen or seventeen they should have been flirting, sexually active, and the tone of the story should have been overall more "mature". Thank you for bringing our childish, moody, angsty Harry into the "real world".

• Payback's A Bitch

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-07-10

  Good chapter. Love the Engleburt Humperdink part. Really good story so far.
  
  gunny

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