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Harry Potter and the Family History
13 reviewsAU. Set after OotP. Harry Potter discovers some intersting facts about his family and new allies that might help him win against Voldemort.
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Harry Potter and the Family History
(#) archangelm 2008-05-25
Think it's a very good first attempt. Hope to see regular updates. Please don't make it a Harry/Ginny story. It would be nice if Harry was a part of a Daywalker Clan.Harry Potter and the Family History
(#) Elfwyn 2008-05-27
I agree with the other reviews; the chapter while extremely short grabbed by attention but there was little to judge the storyline by. If the following chapter are just as short it would be extremely irritating rather than eye catching as one cannot immerse oneself into such a short chapter. Rather just as the story is getting good it stops. While cliffhangers have there places it is not in every chapter especially while trying to establish a storyline. Will look for more of this before I give up though.Harry Potter and the Family History
(#) selenepotter 2008-07-22
I would rather have short chapters, more often than long chapters, less often
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