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Chapter Four - Lina/Shin
1 review"I'm not like those monsters. I wouldn't hurt a beautiful creature such as yourself."
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Of Beast and Man
(#) chibi-neko-chan13 2008-07-23
I think you should continue with Lina and Shin for one more chapter. It'll build up the suspence of what's going to happen to Zylus and keep people reading...plus if you get writing ADD and switch back and forth avery chapter, people tend to get confused...
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