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• Harry's New Pets

  (#) Ina_meishou 2009-02-15

  As of the fifth chapter, this is quite bad.
  
  Some of the gags, Dan's reaction to Minerva's reassurances for instance, are funny, but they aren't enough to ignore the problems.
  
  The true love magical bond between 11 year olds is...laughable. IN addition, while polyamorous relations are perfectly viable, it's terribly unlikely that hey would work out so perfectly as this one has.
  
  All that said, the writing itself isn't to bad at all. Ignoring the content, you seem to have a reasonable grasp of grammar and structure.
  
  

  Author's response

  Thank you for sharing your opinion.
  
  Your feelings of respectful affection are completely reciprocated.

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) stick97 2009-02-15

  @ ina
  
  seriously, in a setting where a child is magically transported across the country and meets a 3/4 girl 1/4 magical love bird creature, sticks make magical things happen, etc. etc. etc.
  
  you really are nitpicking about a poly relationship working?
  
  Really?
  
  Cause those can actually occur, and the magic stuff - not so much.
  
  And so far, it's all just buddy-buddy, no bump and grind.
  
  Looks good so far, and I can see how the original plot bunny is able to reach godzilla proportions.
  
  Can't wait to see it rampage through JK's work.

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) David3560 2009-03-16

  Loves it cant wait for the next chapter to see what happens next please keep going PLEASE!!!!!!!

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) HJHOWE 2009-04-06

  Whip on the plot bunny before I skin it for its fur.
  
  What happens to Fleur when Harry/hermione have to go to school? Does Luna's father come back looking for Her?
  Who sneaks into whoes dorms and do they bother old prudish Dumbles with the details.
  Do they even know the details themselves? Do they want to?
  

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) David3560 2009-05-07

  Question are we going to have more chapters to this story?

  Author's response

  Thanks so much! I hope to get something more of this put up in the next few weeks, once I'm done with this one article I'm working on.
  
  Sorry I can't update more quickly, but I'm a graduate student, and don't have much time for writing lately. For writing fanfic, I should say--my life pretty much revolves around writing non-fiction.

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) empress97 2009-12-24

  I enjoyed the humor and see many possibilities for where you might go next. I hope you continue writing this. It's been many months since your last chapter. Are you going to continue this? Please do.

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) The_Resident 2010-04-10

  I quite enjoyed the 'bonding' of the 4 and the gentle way everything was handled. I found it quite 'child-like' in the best sense of the word. It makes me wish I had such a magical childhood. I do hope that you have plans to continue this special story. Keep up the great work.

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) shinjithegoodsharer 2010-05-16

  I like this story. It has a lot of potential. My one recommendation is that you put more details into your writing. I look forward to reading more soon.

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) Uticadanno 2010-07-09

  I really like this story and would like to see where it's going to go. Hope to see an update soon.

• Harry's New Pets

  (#) whitefish066 2011-08-27

  Just found this story, I enjoyed it immensely, please continue.

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