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You and I Both
2 reviewsAt the end of their European tour Nick and Joe inform Kevin that the Jonas brothers are over. This leads Kevin to O'Malley's where he meet Allie. All is well until Allie and Kevin wake up the next ...
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You and I Both
(#) yayajb 2008-08-03
i have been looking for this since i seen that it was gone from FanFiction but yay i found itYou and I Both
(#) srmyxx 2008-08-11
hii! im new just over from fanfic too
definitly closed minded :(
so im deleting my own story before they can
anyways, i really like your style of writing :)
maybe try a bit more description? i mean it wasnt lacking it, just needed a stronger image of the atmosphere of the bar
otherwise character build ups seem spot on and i cant wait to read the next chapter :D
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