- I, too, feel it would be better if Dumbledore didn't discover about Harry's sight (at least by Hermione). Maybe you could make a situation where Harry has him swear by his magic at the end of the year and then expain to him about it. Though even then I don't think Harry would put up with dumbledore's manipulations.
Great work so far!!!!
- what a joke 6 chapters to get to hermione, come on now and you need to stop making draco the perfect friend he is everything of what ron and hermione were to harry, loyal, smart, caring, ruthless. this gay crush on draco needs to end, everyone has a fault.
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