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Harry Potter: Changing the Soul
(#) LightningGod 2008-08-27
this is a mess...large paragraphs with multiple ideas and topics, plotline just to cliche...
sit back and reread it, get a beta or 3 and an editor...
at the moment it is rubbish
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