this really good cant wait for more
Are you going to show what happens during the year?????
great story keep it going please
An excellent story. Yes, you could end the story here, but you need to at least finish of Mouldy Voldy. I'm sure Hermione's love for Harry and his love for her will figure in there somewhere. Keep up the great work.
Another wonderful story. But, please don't leave it there. Three chapters is just not enough. Please keep it going and how H&H handle Dumbledore, Snape and others.
I'd like to see the rest of the story. Please continue.
As for a real review, I'd like to see more characterization and growth between Harry and Hermione as well as the various other characters and I'd like to be shown more things instead of told that they were happening.
This is true of most of your stories.
I have to agree with Godoma, I'd like to see the rest of the story, including the growing interaction between H&H and how the other characters react to the pairing.
Hope you update soon.
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