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The First Time

by Nooka 0 reviews

It's a poem about rejection, I've rated it PG to be on the safe side. Please R&R

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Published: 2006-03-06 - Updated: 2006-03-06 - 124 words - Complete

Ok, I found this lurking in the poetry section of my folder. I hope you enjoy it and please please review looks at readers with a puppy dog look


The first time.

That feeling of
That feeling of
That feeling of remorse
That refuses to
Let go

The hardest thing to bear
That unloved feeling
Of pain
And despair
Could I have done more?

The days
Slip by
And I
Think of you

Never again
This lesson has
Been learnt
Never again.


I hope you liked it, it was one of the first I've written and it's just been rediscovered in the back of my folder. How that happened will remain a mystery to me. Anyway, review please!

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