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Corpses and Chores
10 reviewsThe fallout from the battle and a tribute to a hero. Afterwards, Harry tries to stratgegize without Molly's bothering.
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Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) vianca 2008-09-06
Now if only somebody finaly gets why Mad-Eye thought that his Magical Eye was feeling a bit weird after being used by that Death Eater in "The Goblet of Fire".
Aka, it's turned into a spying devise for Voldemort.
Thus turning Moody into the one person he is alway's been paranoid about, the spy that didn't know he (or she) was the spy.
Now, what will Harry do now?
I mean, that wedding will be one big change for a hit.
They can't grow back George his ear were it belongs because of the curse.
How about growing it back somewere else and then doing some Muggle cutting and stiching/sowing?
Hope Harry gives Olivander a heads-up, he might need his skill soon.Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-09-06
I liked the changes you made, but I hope the whole story isn't going to be like this...text from DH pasted on with a few changes.
Looking forward to more.Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) DarQuing 2008-09-06
So far I'm liking the story, though I'm sad you killed off Mad-Eye and Hedwig. That being said, I'm kind of glad Mad-Eye is gone because he can be a tad overbearing when it comes to security.Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-09-06
I bet Snapte told Voldemort when Harry and his party were leaving.
If the Wards around the Tonks home were so good whey why were the same Wards not around #4 Privit Drive?
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-09-06
Very good part there, and really enjoyed how this went, and was hoping that Hedwig would make it, but she didn't, so poo! I am also looking forward to what all differences happen at the wedding, and for how other things change up to the time that Ron leaves, unless he does so earlier.Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) StenStyren 2008-09-07
I like it, but please keep it a little bit away from the original. This almost feels like reading the book again.Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) LabRat 2011-06-03
I was kind of hoping that with Hedwig going with someone else, she'd survive. I mean, Harry gave her to Remus, shouldn't he have been carrying her?Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) Procusi 2012-03-11
Anyone else think that they are morons for carrying an owl in a cage as opposed to freeing her and letting her fly?Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
(#) squidrow 2021-03-05
Sorry but you lost me when you had Hedwig killed.Author's response
Yeah, that's fair. I wasn't too creative back then. Feared changing things around too much.
Thanks for giving it a shot!
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