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It was some kind of sick joke on God’s behalf, he was sure of that. Tim Shepard a father? ONESHOT.
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The Baby Blues
(#) Perusal 2008-11-15
I thought that this fic was an amazing read that truly stuck to (what we all believe would be) Tim Shepard's character. However, I did see a few typos here and there (you're probably going to think that I'm being really bitchy):
"He sounded just like his mother."
It should be "she", right?
"-taking to strangers and showing off pictures of his daughter-"
You skipped out on the "l".
Besides my annoying nitpicks, I hope you appreciate the review! Great story!
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