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Shades of Gray
(#) Vulkan 2008-09-22
This is awesome. I like the new concepts and teh races you have introduced. Nundu and Chimera for pets??? But hey, it would be fun to see them fight and grow. But, in light of those, a Runespoor seems kinda lame. You could have gone with something new - a dragon or a crossbreed creature with new abilities.
Continue with the good work and update soon.Shades of Gray
(#) lycus 2008-09-23
This has been great so far, and I have to agree that. I would love to see how people are reacting to Harrys disappearing. And I know that you said that you won't deal with pairings yet but please please be realistic with the Ron and Hermione thing, with all of the crap that they put each other through don't try to make them a couple and especally now that they don't have Harry there to bring them back together, and lets face facts with Harry gone do you really think that Ron won't try to take Harrys place, and try to act like the big man now. Sorry about that, I am a member of the I hate Ron fanclub. But the leadership thing is just natural Harry is just not afraid to assert himself now that he doesn't have to live up to anyones expectations.Shades of Gray
(#) Concealed-Convict 2009-02-04
Great story so far. I can't wait to read of Dumbledore and co's reactions; it should be interesting. Just one question: why do you use alpha, beta, gamma and delta? It actually goes alpha, beta charlie and delta.
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