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Kiss Me Awake
10 reviewsHelena has a little surprise for Harry. Narcissa and Bellatrix meet the man of their dreams. Narcissa and Draco escape. No sex, but lots of story!
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If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-10-11
Great part here, and you continue to do things with character most people use porly. I mean Hot/Sexy Poppy, I see some fics where Harry goes back and is with Minnie, but no loving for Poppy. Is not fair! At least in this, maybe Poppy might consider de-aging with this at least for one romp? Loved the parts with the sisters in the dreamscape, and Bellatrix who wants to be Bella to the right guy, and Cissy as well. Will look forward to the eventual waking up, and what all this will mean to the elders when Harry has to wake them up in the traditional way, as it seems like elder Bella will freak completely out if she reacts to a kiss being transmitted.Author's response
Thanx, glad you like it so far. Just call me the champion of the under-realized character. Remember, Poppy is half Minnie’s actual age so she could probably do with just two or three treatments. . .
Good call on how the “dependency factor” will affect Bellatrix. It’s going to make Narcissa’s life more interesting too, as well as one other person. . .
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(#) radiofishlip 2008-10-11
mmm what can i say i love the story so far and continue to await the contuation i would love to see longer chapters postedcloser together but i am a writer as well and im sure that my readers are waiting for the next chapter so i know we just have to ait till its finishedAuthor's response
Thanx for reading and reviewing. I had a longer chapter, but this was a good stopping point. For the record its about 2500 words - pretty typical for a chapter. Chapter 20 is already that long, and it's not nearly ready.
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(#) ShadowFlash 2008-10-11
Nice. Please have Narcissa and bellatrix in the harem. and I hpe there will be some Lemon between Harry/Narcissa/Bellatrix soon. Please hurry up with next chapterAuthor's response
I have good news and bad news.'
Good news: there is indeed some Harry/Sisters Black interaction in the next chapter.
Bad news: you'll have to wait at least until next Saturday.
Patience, Grasshopper. . .
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(#) jump_jives 2008-10-11
A very good chapter. As you said, no smut, but it moved the story along nicely. I will admit to being a little surprised another Ghost is pregnant as I didn't think you would add another pregnancy so soon. I am looking forward to more interaction with Bella and Cissy as I have enjoyed what you have done with Bella before in Family Issue.
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I admit to having a bit of a crush on Bella, of course the fact that I think Helena Bonham Carter is hot doesn’t hurt either. Let’s just say Harry’s libido isn’t the only thing “enhanced” by his Goddess/Mum Astarte – he has the potential to be an unprecedented baby-maker.
“Contraceptive potions? I laugh at your puny contraceptive potions!”
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(#) DavidMPotter 2008-10-11
This is a great story. I so look forward to more. I await my next fix!Author's response
Thanx, glad you like it, David. Look for an update next Saturday.
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(#) lycus 2008-10-11
I love this story! i just can't say that enough, And I hope that Poppy will be able to be with Harry too beacause I have only read one story where she was with Harry and if anyone can make Poppy hot it would be you. And as for the Black sisters it seems like both Narcissa and Cissy liked the kiss, And so did Bella but Bellatrix pitched a fit about it, I guess I'll have to wait and see about that. But I wanted to say that a lot of the school stuff is being ingnored, Like some one at the school has got to have figured something out, At least the girls in Hogwarts will wonder how Myrtle gained a body even if they don't recognize Helena. And guys will wonder why all those girls attention is focused on Harry.Author's response
Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing. I think Poppy has an “in” with Harry, he loves her already as a forty-something, he’ll go ga-ga over a rejuvenated Poppy – why do I hear faint suggestions of a “Poppy seed roll,” hmmmmmm, this could be the birth of a truly horrible pun. . .
As far as why no one seems to be paying attention to what’s going on around Harry, remember, he’s doing two time-turned days for every normal day, so not even a week has passed in real time (Harry has been known to spend that much time in the hospital wing!). There are truths and rumors floating about – everyone has known from day one that Harry needs time away to study for his OWLs and NEWTs so that he can assume his duties as TA. Myrtle doesn’t spend a lot of time with other students at this point because, along with nineteen other students, she’s also helping Harry prep for his exams. At the end of one week, real time, Harry will have taken his OWLs.
The rumor that Harry has a “harem” is not without merit, and no one is denying anything. I prefer the word coven (a lovely witch that I know in St. Augustine would rather call it a “Circle.”)
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(#) Cateagle 2008-10-11
A very nice chapter with some interesting and different ideas being played with. It should be interesting to see how the interactions with the Black sisters develops amidst all the other action going on (and I agree with lycus that at least one person at Hogwarts has to have wondered what's going on when things get a bit more stranger than normal - on the other hand, we -are- dealing with wizards here and they seem to have a bit less regard for logic and cause and effect than non-magicals.Author's response
Thanx, glad you like it - I’m trying to keep it all fresh. Good call on wizards being a bit slow on the uptake, but, as I responded to Lycus, Harry is living three days for every one in real time. Eventually even Ron will begin to notice. . .
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(#) JohnWeasly 2008-10-12
The Black Girls in the coven, not that would cause Voldemorts hair (if he had any) to stand on end. The story is getting to be as good or even better than the sex, keep it up please (no pun intended.
Oh and how would you off the existing Black women? Let them be tortured by the interaction of the non-clones with Lord Potter.Author's response
Thanx, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story so far.
Bella and Cissy will be joining the Coven in chapter 20 – Bellatrix and Narcissa will definitely be affected by their interactions with Lord Harry. One will completely freak, the other will find sweet agony. Stay tuned!
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(#) LabRat 2008-10-25
I think it would be wise for Harry to keep his winky out of former ghosts, cause he's two for two now. Man if one isn't odd enough, he's now knocked up two ghosts.Author's response
Would this be a good time to mention that, since Harry's been "tweaked" by a true Goddess of Sex that contraceptives might not work against his "swimmers?"
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