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Five Beautiful Boys
(#) alice93 2008-10-13
You should've made Frank say "do you know what they do to guys like us in prison?" Lol. This was a great chapter, it was nice to see a slightly softer side to Frank. It's also nice to have a fan-fic where Mikey is the irresistably cute one and not Gerard-well they're both irresistably cute. I hope to see more dimentions to Ray and Bob's characters soon too. (and Gee's) Update soon. Alice.Author's response
Lol! You have no idea how hard I fought to stop myself have Frank saying that! I really just didn't think I'd get away with it!
Thanks as always for rating/reviewing.
Sas xFive Beautiful Boys
(#) never0kay 2008-10-14
So...Frank is doing this for revenge? Injustice? Poverty? I love those kinds of talk. And yes...I agree with Alice...I would also like to take a peek on the minds of Ray and Bob.
I'm glad that Frank gets to be nice for once in this story.
Carry on..Five Beautiful Boys
(#) GhostOfYouMW 2008-10-14
Love it.
I really like the way that you've created to very different sides to Frank; you've made him into a really deep character. You really do write well (:
Update soon please?
Jake.Author's response
Thanks everyone! I'm so please you're still enjoying it! This one is, I guess, a lot more serious and character based than some of my others, so I was concerned I'd get it all wrong for you.
Anyway, I have about a third of Chapter 7 written - hope to finish it either tomorrow or Thurs.
Thanks again, so much!!!!
Sas x
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