Brown hair frames that pretty face, green eyes, all lies searing into your soul. She's a heart stealer, a man eater, and she's coming for you.
Sounds like a good song :]
I liked it.
Good song lyrics.
I liked the word choice :]
That would make a really good song!
It was so sad.... the emotion was so strong too!
I think that this i a really good song with really good emothion. I've been reading your writing and you are very good with figurative language and descriptions. Keep it up!
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