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Deadlines
(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-01
that was a hott update. write more soon.Author's response
Thank you, it's so difficult to write because i try to describe it using as little words as possible so i just hope people can use their imaginations. Seems to work i think.Deadlines
(#) disturbedangel6 2008-11-02
Lmao!!
Sexy
I never knew you were gonna ever update with a sex scene yay!!!
Update soonxxAuthor's response
Hurrah i surprised you ;)
I'm so pleased you left a review - thank youDeadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2008-11-02
Hi there neve,
That was incredibly hott!! I really love these two together. Damn Justin and Ruth for coming home early.
It was a great update and I loved every second of it.
Looking forward to more!!Author's response
I didn't think my update had worked, i got chucked out of ficwad yesterday and i gave up. Then the updates doesn't appear to be showing on the main list but i got reviews (yippee). So strange.
Poor Bob, i think he might explode.Deadlines
(#) easykeys 2008-11-02
That was deffo very hot. Them two are so freaking cute together, I love the way they seem so in love but can also have a joke around with eachother and seem so comfortable.
And trust Frank to send a dirty text haha!
Cant wait for more, seriously
dondon xo.Author's response
Thank you so much. I love that people like the Jill/Bob pairing - it's so cool.
I couldn't go through a whole chapter without mentioning something from Frank. Poor Bob when they all get back together.Deadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2008-11-02
Hi Neve,
I rated your story too and it seems they hadn't taked the rating from my bucket but they won't allow me to re-rate. The last chapter has been going in and out. Though if I go to the previous chapter and there is an arrow for the next one. Ficwad can be such a pain sometimes.
I'm glad it's up though it was such a great chapter!Author's response
No worries, thanks for trying to rate :) I really don't know why i am having such a problem with posting. Maybe it's because my story has got too big. I managed to get it to appear by editing it. So frustrating.Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-11-02
hey thanks for updating!
yay Bob and Jill getting down and dirty! they are such a great couple! nice to see them both coming out of their shells!
oh and i love Ruth so much!! she would be my friend!
really good, just wonder what is going to happen next??!
more soon please!Author's response
Thank you so much, i have loads of ideas about what to do next and i kinda know where i want to go. I really appreciate your review, thank you.Deadlines
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-11-03
OMFG....that was fucking funny...
Frank is so funny....MORE@Author's response
ha ha - i promise to post soon but i'm having a few things going on at the mo, but i will try. :)
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