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My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) easykeys 2008-11-11
OMG
I really thought it was going to be a sad ending. That was the best fucking epilouge I have ever read!
I loved the fact it was christmas, it made everything so magical and lovely.
Bobby is waaaay too cute, and I loved the way he went on about Santa lol.
I am so pleased that everything ended up happy :)
Amazing job, even though am gunna miss this story heaps! *wipes tear*
Whenever I'm sad I will read this epilouge.
Cant wait for more of your stories!!
Once again, amazing job!!
dondon xo.Author's response
Hi there dondon,
LOL!!! The sad ending was in My Simple Chemical Life. As soon as I decided to do a sequel I knew they would end up together. Which I decided very early on in MSCL.
There were a few ways I was going with it. Either at the 2nd Annual Benefit Ball for her mother. Even a few years in the future. I was watching You Tube yesterday and on the side was All I Want for X-Mas, I got the words and created the last chapter around it.
That's what I wanted, something magical for them.
LOL I loved writing Bobby, sort of you writing about Charli. LOL!!!
I'm glad you're pleased.
Believe me it's bittersweet for me too. I love these characters. But you've read my others so you can see the potential for them. It will be nice to write something different. I also have a Ray story swirling in my mind.
Oh that's sp sweet.
Thanks again so much for the reviews!!!My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) alice93 2008-11-11
That was so happy, I'm crying. I think it was the song that set me off-all I could hear was Gerard singing! There couldn't have been a more perfect ending. It was so beautiful. Is that completely the end? I hope not. Amazing chapter! Alice.Author's response
Hi Alice,
I didn't mean to make you cry. Honestly I was a little teary eyed when Bob pulled out the picture for the first time and was making the wish. Shoot I'm getting choked up just typing about it.
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it.
Yes it's the completely the end. Who knows maybe after I finish the ome of the stories I started maybe I might think of something. LOL!! I think I need to grieve for these characters. I'm like Gerard I feel I need a break from them and see what happens afterwards.
Thanks so much for all your reviews!!!My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) ThnksbutiloveBobmore 2008-11-11
First off- I was OMGing at the beggining, i thought you had actually broken them up for good.
and wow at bob killing mark, your such an amazing writer, always with the twists in the story. xD
ANNND AWWWW, so cute, they got back together on christmas, had a baby, got interrupted during sex by a 1 year old, awkward much?
I love that Bobby was "unimpressed", so cute.
That was and amazing ending and i am gonna miss this story SO MUCH!
*cries*
SUch a brilliant story, i shall now go and read everything you write and try and review every story.
and one last time
I LOVE YOU, YOUR AMAZING
Ello
XXXXXXXX
P.S I gonna aim to be your no.1 fan, although i have a lot of competition
xDAuthor's response
Hi Ello,
LOL!!! Yeah I wanted you to think that. My evil plan worked.
I was waiting months to reveal that I'm glad at least you were surprised that Bob killed Mark!!
Yeah I read the words for All I Want For Christmas and thought it was perfect and a perfect time to get them back together.
I imagine two year old boys could care less about babies and probably thinks that she'll be a nusance.
I'm missing it already with thoughts of Bobby and Jessica swirling through my mind. LOL!! Dondon said she wanted to write something with one of her characters and Bobby. LOL!!
Maybe a nice little one shot focusing on the two of them. LOL!!
I'm already starting to think of these characters again!! LOL!!
I hope this isn't the very last time you say it.
I love you too!!
Well you've read my first two stories and dondon has read my my two current stories so you're tied right now!! LOL!!!
Thanks for all your reviews through out this!!My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) easykeys 2008-11-11
Ooooo I love a little bit of competiton >:-)
#1 Fan award here I come!
dondon xo.Author's response
LOL!!
You guys are too funny!!
It's nice to feel loved!!My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) doyleangel 2008-11-17
AAAHHH FANTASTIC. Such a better ending than the prequel lol. I was a little scared though when the beginning sentance said she walked out on Bob....sigh...you're killing me girl.Author's response
Thanks!!!
I'm glad you liked this ending better!!
You aren't the first one with that reaction.
LOL!!!
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it. Did you think it was Bob btw?My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) doyleangel 2008-11-18
No, i really didn't think it was him at all. I was shocked when I read that.Author's response
Good, that was my intention!!
Thanks for the review!!My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) falloutboyangel 2008-11-23
awwwwwwwww tear
sorry i havent been reviewing as much but i've been reading and i have loved these 2 storys so much it makes me happy knowing that there's a happy ending! Awesome job. :)Author's response
Hi there,
That's okay, I'm so glad you enjoy reading them. As much as I love reviews (who doesn't) I'm really glad that people are just enjoying reading them.
Yeah I couldn't leave it on a sad note. I always knew there was going to be a happy ending to the sequel. I liked these characters too much for it not to be.
Thanks so much for the compliment I really appreciate it!!
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