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Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) KirstinRevenge 2008-11-14
Are you giving up on this?
don't, please...Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) Moonshyne 2008-11-15
Noooo!!!
Don't give up? This story has so much potential. Take a deep breath and take a break away from it. Take a walk clear your mind you'll never know what will pop up. You have at few really interesting story limes going on here.
Jade trying to get Charli back, Rick trying to hurt Gee, as much as they love touring w/Charli at some point it has to be difficult and not all fun and games (Kids are difficult at that age under normal circumstances, never mind a bus), Frankie's little side story, Gerard and his relationship with his Mom, and finally Gee and Harper.
Maybe pik one of those and focus on it.
Don't give up totally, maybe put it on hiatus until you can think of something. Honestly the chapters that take me forever to write because I'm not in the mood and let myself get so easily side tracked sometimes end up being the best. Just be patient and don't give up. You have a few people who really love this story. Please don't give up. :(Author's response
Yeah, that's a good idea.
I think I will take a little break and think of which one to focus on.
Thanks for the adivce and encouragment :)
your the best!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-15
Dont give up I really love this story. Its a good one to read update soon.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-17
Sorry I'm a little late on reviewing this ... but yeah, like everyone else said, you should finish this one up because we'd all like to know where it ends up. I've read a lot of stuff in the archives here that seemed like a pretty good story, and then it never gets finished.
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