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The world had ended in flames. And then Lieutenant General Harry Potter, commander of the Magical Tactics Squad, woke up and found himself staring into the green eyes of a three year old Harry Pott...
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Parallel: Harry Potter
(#) Ramsey 2008-11-18
Please continue one of your parallel stories, they're quite interesting.
In fact, I'm lovingly reading "Searching for disaster" as well, excellent story.
Please replace Shades of Grey with one of the parallel stories, I consider it the least of your stories.
~RamseyParallel: Harry Potter
(#) ChiVayne 2008-11-21
I would have liked the premise better if a muggle government was leading the persecution of the wizards, or a dark lord had set off the hatred. While I agree that we humans tend to hate what we fear or don't understand, I don't believe normal humans would set off a war given all of the other problems and fears facing them. I realize it has happened in history, but the world wars that have occurred in recent history started for quite different reasons.
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