"I’m a mistake, a mutant, and not one of the good kind." (Frerard; one-shot.)
Just beautiful. I love your style . . . such a clear and touching voice. Good work!
I love, love, love this!
Continue, por favor.
I just noticed something..
It's a one-shot?
NOOO! PLEASE CONTINUE!
I'll give you a cookie or a piece of vegetarian lasagna!
You don't have to continue if you don't want to. I'm just being really dramatic.
But I really did enjoy this; it was original and interesting. And a continuation would be lovely. But as said before, I won't bully or bribe you with lasagna to continue. Hahaha.
I think you should really make this into a story. It's really good. But it's up to you if you continue or not.
It's really origenal.
This is beautiful, really. So simple but full of emotions and great story telling.
It's great as a oneshot, but I would love to see it evolve into a story.
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