Reviews for The Orange Book :: FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

Categories > Anime/Manga > Naruto

The Orange Book

by Immortal7 2 reviews

Kakashi always carries around with himself a certain little orange book. However what if the contents of the book were the farthest thing from what they appeared to be. What if the contents were mo...

Category: Naruto - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Kakashi - Published: 2008-11-18 - Updated: 2008-11-19 - 2130 words - Complete

-1Cliche

Reviews

The Orange Book

(#) Mairead 2008-11-18

Have you thought about looking for a beta? There are some problems with commas here that might be driving your readers away.
The Orange Book

(#) Mairead 2008-11-18

Whoops! Sorry for giving you the same review twice, I forgot to check who the author was :)

Sign up to review this story.