Kakashi always carries around with himself a certain little orange book. However what if the contents of the book were the farthest thing from what they appeared to be. What if the contents were mo...
Have you thought about looking for a beta? There are some problems with commas here that might be driving your readers away.
Whoops! Sorry for giving you the same review twice, I forgot to check who the author was :)
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