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Calling all females
2 reviewsPervert. A person thats sexual behavior is unacceptable. And in the village of the leaf this is a tale of how one man, no a boy almost made his preversion acceptable. And how a demon stole his drea...
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Calling all females
(#) Mairead 2008-11-18
Have you thought about looking for a beta? It might help you with some of the grammar / typo problems.Calling all females
(#) TheDarkAvenger 2009-03-02
It could have been a 5 star one shot if the grammar was better and the reply was short and punchy!
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