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The bed upon which the lovers lie becomes unclean, dirtied by the hand of the dead...
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First Date
(#) roxy_foxx 2008-11-22
yay! im the first to review!!!!!
dude she must already know where they live!
she's creepy!
and i think Slash is right
but i dont think Axl is dead still
Author's response
How do you know she's creepy? How do you know she's not there to help them? ;) I suppose all will be revealed soon. And Axl is dead, just how dead is the question. ;)First Date
(#) your_michelle 2008-11-22
Ohh I love how this is becoming such a horror story while still sticking to the romantic side of things! The bloody A is very eerie but intriguing to say the least and this Ms. Lucille sounds either legitimately crazy or curiously in touch with another world. Perhaps she knows where they live because she's been there before? Maybe she's got red hair and a thing for Izzy... just puttin' it out there! LOL Fantastic as always and also as always, I can't wait for more!!Author's response
Thank you very much! I used to write horror before I wrote fan-fiction so it's nice to do a bit of it. :) And who knows about Ms. Lucille. All I do know, is that she has an apprentice with her. One we might all recognise. ;)First Date
(#) littlemissbrownstone 2008-11-23
Ooo how exciting! I love voodoo and hoodoo and all that kind of stuff! My last art project was on African Hoodoo dolls and it pretty much freaked the fuck out of everyone! I'm loving where this is going...even though Axl's dead...but not totally dead... I'm in love with your story and I intend on marrying it. Perfect job again!Author's response
LOL Thank you very much! You can take First Date and marry it and have its little babies if you like. :P Now, that would be interesting. "The Son of First Date"... ;)First Date
(#) DefLeppardess 2008-11-25
Ooo! Amazing as always! And creepy. The 'A' on the sheets scares me. I used to live in an apartment, and there was a blood stain on the carpet that always did that, no matter how many times the carpet was changed...Or so the landlady says. A lot of freaky stuff happened in the apartment.
As usual, you've got me on the edge of my chair! Would you mind if I saved this entire fic to my desktop to read, in case my internet decides to die again? =)Author's response
Thank you! I've lived in a few odd places myself over the years. Seen a lot of strange things happen which may or may not have been a result of odd brain processes.
And sure, feel free to save it! :)
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