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• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) easykeys 2008-11-23

  Woah, heart in mouth chapter!
  
  I honestly thought they were going to get caught when the police came to the door.
  
  Mikey's idea was really good, it all fit together so well.
  
  Frank and him, aww.
  
  This would make an awesome sequel, hint hint ;)
  
  great job.
  
  dondon xo.

  Author's response

  I'm really pleased you enjoyed it!
  
  But, you know, i was going to take a break after this one, but now you've put the idea in my head and the cogs are whirring! I make no promises though :D
  
  Sas x

• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) alice93 2008-11-23

  That was a great chapter. I really did think they'd get arrested. Such a happy ending too. Mikey's...gah...amazing. I have some questions for you though. Is this definately the last chapter? What about a sequel? Alice.

  Author's response

  Thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
  
  Yes it really is the last chapter. And that's 2 of you asking for a sequel now! I'm VERY flattered that you enjoyed it enough to want more :) I'll hang on and see if it's a popular idea but will put my mind to a plot in the meantime.
  LOL - The Continuing Adventures of Our Five Beautiful Boys ;)
  
  Sas x

• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-11-23

  OMG
  
  I can't believe it's over!! I really loved this story, it was so different.
  
  There were so many moving moments from Frank not leaving anyone behind to Bob refusing to stay behind and Mikey's little squeeze of his hand. It was so sweet.
  
  The excitement of how they were going to get out, then the cops showing up and finally all of them together.
  
  I loved how they are all going into business together.
  
  Yeah I smell a lot of possibilities for a sequel or a series of them The Adventures of... focusing on different cases!! LOL!!!
  
  Great story Sassy!!!

  Author's response

  OMG! Three sequel requests! I am now seriously hugely flattered and what can I say? A sequel it is :D
  
  Thanks everyone am I so very pleased you liked it. I enjoyed writing it too :)
  
  Sas x

• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) fallingangel 2008-11-23

  OMG
  i loved this story can belive its over=[.....
  mikey and frank thats so cute bless,and bob sticking with the gang im proud lol....i really taught they were going to get caught thank god they escaped lol.....
  so sequel?you know you want to lol=]
  i like the whole"the adventrures of"
  getting to the point awesome story
  
  xoxo
  holly

• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) xDescendingAngelx 2008-11-23

  oh my god.
  this has got to be the BEST thing i've read in a long time. it was perfect! i swear you had me smiling like an idiot at my computer for the last few paragraphs =D
  i love how you ended it, with them all together. i officially love you =) mikey/frank = cute together

• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) never0kay 2008-11-24

  Awesome ending. I love the way you end your stories. It made me smile especially the last paragraphs and the paragraphs concerning Frank and Mikey's close relationship as well. Honestly, I thought they'd get arrested, but Mikey came to the rescue...oh and Gerard too. Awesome story. Twas the best!

  Author's response

  Thank you! It's always a pleasure to know that people enjoy my stories and even more so when I see that you've enjoyed others too!
  
  Ah well, back to a blank sheet of paper!
  
  Sas x
  
  update - that sheet of paper's not so blank any more ;) Will post something soon
  
  Thanks again, everyone!
  
  Sas x

• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) myspaceaddict25 2009-05-05

  This story was brilliant!

  Author's response

  Thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) I had a lot of fun writing it too.
  
  Sas x

• Five Beautiful Boys

  (#) GirlWhoCriedBoo 2011-01-09

  I love the full story and you should know that I hardley every comment on anything this is probably only the second time ever. I wish the story could go on but I like how it ended and it was just the right length. You should seriously change the names and puublish it as a short story or something because I would deffinetly buy it! Thanks for an Amazing story
  Beth! X

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