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Forget the Alamo

by Kill-Your-Own-Chorus 0 reviews

BMTH + Moshpits = Chaos

Category: Humor - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Humor - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2008-12-08 - Updated: 2008-12-08 - 928 words

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Chapter 16: F o r g e t t h e A l a m o

--China's POV---

Tonight was the night. I was gonna rock out with Oli and BMTH, and then i was gonna hang with him along with my friends. I teased up my hair and stared at my outfit; black skinny's and a red zebra Abbey Dawn sweatshirt. I let out a shaky sigh as the butterflies grew in my stomach. I couldn't believe i was actually hanging with them! This was all too good to be true.

Suddenly my phone buzzed in my pocket. I picked it up happily and answered it.

"Y'elllo!"

"Hey love, it's me" a male voice spoke.

Ahhh! It was Oli.

"Hey Oli," I chirped,"What's going on?"

"Nothing much, just getting ready for the big show. You're coming right?"

"I'm holding my ticket right now" I answered as I grabbed it.

"Good, 'cause right after the concert we're getting it on"

"hahaha, No."

"I was only Joking," He giggled lightly,"Be sure to be in front, okay?"

"I'll try my best. I'll see you later, bye hun"

"Bye love"

I let out a silent squeal as I headed out the door and into the chilly night. This was going to be one concert I was never going to forget.

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Man was it packed! I had no idea that it would be THIS massive. I walked into the venue hesitantly, thousands of people gently pushing and rushing to get a good spot. I was really excited to get into the pits and start knocking people over. I just hoped though that Oli would be able to see me through the mass of fans. The smell of beer and cigarette smoke filled my nose as the opening band came on. People began to scream and shout loudly, the guitar's high pitched chords piercing my ears. People began to push and shove violently, and that's when I put my game face on. I jumped as high as I could. I kicked and flailed around wildly, not caring what or who I hit. I kneed a girl in the face, and in return she jabbed into my side. I felt the pain surge through my body, but that didn't stop me from rocking out loud. People where running onto the stage and jumping into the crowd, only to land hard on the floor. As two whole bands finished their score, it was time for the fun to really start. The lights went off completely and a rough pig squeal rumbled through the speakers. Girls were screeching loudly as Boys shouted obscenities. As the lights shot back on, Matt let out a loud double bass beat and Curtis began to play "Medusa". Everyone began to shove and punch violently, which made me end up with everyone's wieght land on me. I felt this one scene kid behind me repeatedly knock me in the back over and over. I screamed at him to stop, but he kept on doing it! So, I decided to handle it professionally and I elbowed him in the face. As I looked up at Oli I felt something jab into me 10 times harder, it was that stupid scene kid again! I turned around quickly and swung my arm at him, knocking my fist into his face. I still don't have any idea on why I did that. It was either all the violent hype from the concert, or all the heat from everyone's bodies rubbing against me. I noticed that blood was dripping from his nose, and a loud curse came from his mouth. I couldn't hear it, thankfully, but it looked alot like the word bitch. He eyed me visciously and I secretly prayed to myself he wouldn't come after me. Chivalry still exists, doesn't it? I turned around quickly and kept on moshing, pretending that I had never noticed his injury. I suddenly felt a fist jab into the back of my head. It didn't feel like knuckles though, it actually felt like their was something extra to it. I turned around quickly and noticed a scene girl (i'm assuming girlfriend) wearing rings on her clenched fist. Pain was actually ringing through my brain as I covered my injury and went down onto the ground. People were jumping on me and spilling their nasty ass beers on my entire body. I curled up into a ball as I felt the pain sharply shoot throughout parts of my body. My vision was getting extremely fuzzy as I heard Oli's loud rigid scream through the speakers. Suddenly the loud music went to a halt and Oli screamed something in the microphone. I couldn't make it out though, I had the blessing of blacking out right where I was.

---- Nadia's POV ----

"HE'S COMING WITH US?!" Tegan shrieked through our four-way phone conversation.

"Yes!! Calm down! We're doing this for china" Amy explained.

"Screw China! That jerk better not get his pedo-ass near us or her!" Tegan shrieked again.

"Tegan! Cool it, he's only going to Chipotle with us," I spoke out.

"Does he really have to?" Tasha groaned,"I personally don't wanna see them mack out"

"Did you guys know that early astronauts wore diapers?" Bridget informed.

"Birdy what the hell!" Tegan yelled.

"What?" Bridget asked with surprise.

"This isn't the time for 'The More You Kow', we're discussing about Oli" Amy answered.

"Well sorry, but you know, people with smaller brains are smarter" She informed us.

"Well I think China just defyed that statement" I giggled out.
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