(#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-12-20I love the story so far! And its not only because my name is also Lindsey! I can't wait to see what happens with Pete and Lindsey on their date. And Amanda, I hope she doesn't let jealousy ruin their friendship. I love the story, update soon please! (I tried to review before, but I wasn't sure if it went through and I wanted to make sure you knew what I thought of it!) =]
(#) SeeStraightUp 2008-12-22You could always try keeping Amanda, btu having Pete introduce a new charcter(say one of his friends) and her being like "Wow, he's hot." then getting all mushy to Lindsey and beind sorry for being jealous. Its a litlte cliche and over used, but hey it works. Or you could just get rid of her and have her die in a horrific plane crash. That works too ^.^Not a big fan Of Amanda. I love this story. Please keep it going!
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