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feaking out, fights and jealousy.

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2008-12-18 - Updated: 2008-12-19 - 1146 words

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Sleepless in New York

(#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-12-20

I love the story so far! And its not only because my name is also Lindsey! I can't wait to see what happens with Pete and Lindsey on their date. And Amanda, I hope she doesn't let jealousy ruin their friendship. I love the story, update soon please! (I tried to review before, but I wasn't sure if it went through and I wanted to make sure you knew what I thought of it!) =]
Sleepless in New York

(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-12-21

amanda get rid of her shes a bitch lol. Update soon!
Sleepless in New York

(#) SeeStraightUp 2008-12-22

You could always try keeping Amanda, btu having Pete introduce a new charcter(say one of his friends) and her being like "Wow, he's hot." then getting all mushy to Lindsey and beind sorry for being jealous. Its a litlte cliche and over used, but hey it works. Or you could just get rid of her and have her die in a horrific plane crash. That works too ^.^Not a big fan Of Amanda. I love this story. Please keep it going!