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Chapter 3
47 reviewsSomething in Harry changes that summer between fourth and fifth year. At his trial he discovers what someone has been hiding from him since he was born.
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Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Phinphile 2008-12-27
Love the story. I'm looking forward to learning more about the "voice".Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) DavidMPotter 2008-12-27
I love this story! I so look forward to coming chapters. I love the fact he allowed Malfoy to know he could have taken him down but did not. I also look forward to see how Dumbles will muddy the pond at Grimald Place for Harry. I also look forward to Harry informing the Weasleys about the Pruitt seat and Percy's change of heart.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Cateagle 2008-12-27
Snort!! I'm going to be very interested in seeing the source of that voice advising Harry so well. Meanwhile, that's a superb use of the trial to rectify matters in Harry's life that need such action; I do love it that Dumbles was cuaght with his hand very firmly in the cookie jar. Given the changes Harry's already made in how things are done at Grimauld Place, I wonder if Albus is going to have as much effect there as he expects? Too, the visit from Percy should likely create some very interesting ripples as the Weasleys suddenly find they have a very valid reason to distrust Dumbledore. This promises to be quite the wild ride ahead.
It's rather interesting that Harry didn't expose Lucius and I wonder how that little move will affect Lucius' attitude toward Harry.
There are a few errors that rather grate on the nerves. "...This session is to determine Please take your seats.” has a word or words missing, I'd suggest "...This session is to determine this matter. Please take your seats.” SImilarly, “This convenes our meeting." should be “This concludes our meeting." There are some other errors but none as egregious as these two.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Cateagle 2008-12-27
PS. I'm really looking forward to seeing what Lily's letter says and what plans and schemes that upsets.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Dave0126 2008-12-27
I love to see Dark Lord Dumbledore get publicly spanked. Hopefully we will see the dementors get traced back to dUmbitch.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) dennisud 2008-12-30
WOW I really like this chapter, it certainly makes up for the way things went in the previous chapter. Please remember Hermione is a know-it-all but IS open to wanting to learn about the Wizarding world. Also even though Harry is trying to learn about being a proper Noble Wizard he has what seems to be nobility in the muggle world which Hermione would be properly positioned to help him.
I am highly interested as to where this will go and do remember who are death eaters and if Harry's new views sway more to the gray and not dark all the better.
dennisud
P.S.-Can't wait to see who is that voice in his head. I surmise a Grandfather or his mom!Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) C4Drake 2009-01-02
good chapter and its good to see harry out of the old man's thumb so update soon.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) slashslut 2009-01-03
I love that dumbles is getting shown up publicly and that his manipulations are unraveling. I'm a bit peeved though that no immediate action is being taken against him, though I'm hoping that since the "allegations" are being made public he will be less likely to continue to get back at harry in some way. Interesting that Percy seems to be on his side too, and I'm glad that other "secondary" characters are being presented instead of the usual cast. But I doin't get why lucius wasn't unmasked in harry's memories? curious. I'm looking forward to what comes next. read ya later:)Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) fubar 2009-01-04
I can handle a manipulative Dumbledore but I really don't get your decision to not out all the Deatheaters. I really hope this isn't some poor Riddle or Deatheaters are missunderstood story because then I can spare me further chapters.
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