(#) xxinSANExx 2009-01-06Okay, I have been reading your stories for a while and find them really intreuging(sp? sorry crap speller!)they are really believable(Sp? I told you I was a crap speller!)and it's pretty neat that you can pull actual time peroids from your life and alter them just so, to then be able to transfer it to Gerard's point of view. Oh and this story is my favorite, which is obviously why I am commenting...Okay I' rambeling. Sorry for shit spelling and grammar. I'm tired. GIVE ME A BREAK!
Author's responseHey thanks for commenting (and reading). I'm a crap speller too. When I was growing up I was too lazy to bust out the dictionary so I'd think of other words for whatever it was I wanted to spell that I actually did know how to spell. LOL You should try that, it's fun. I think in a weird way that helped me more 'cause now I have a better vocabulary. LMAO. Well, there's always spell check too. I have it turned on on my computer so it even works on the web. It's pretty sweet.
Oh and thank for the shout out in your bio.
(#) Leah270193 2009-01-17I love this story. I've think I've reviewed quite a few of the chapters. You're a excellent writer. But to be truly honest I've come to ask for an opinion and a little help, as I respect you the most out of the authors I like on ficwad. My story paper blade tears. I can't remember if you read it. If you haven't please do and can you suggest how I make it better. Someone gave me a -1 and I'm a little unsure how to sort it out
Author's responseThank you. That's nice to hear you respect my stuff =D
I'll go have a look and write up a review for you.
(#) AfterShockPrincess 2009-02-12i cant actually finish reading this story, its so emotional.As impossible and stupid it sounds, i could kinda feel what iy must have been like for him. so sorry i coukdnt complete it but i have tried like a billion times over the last few weeks but still couldnt =[ xoxo
Author's responseAhh, no worries. Thanks for trying! You should go on and skip ahead to the last two "days" ... those are the happiest.
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