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If The Clouds Were Singing A Song.
(#) iluvsmiliez 2009-01-03
This second chapter made me smile numerous times. I seriously love this.
The word choice, the order in which everything goes. Perfect. Update soon, muh love.
-Helen.Author's response
Awe, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
:]If The Clouds Were Singing A Song.
(#) infinite-oddity 2009-01-03
That was perfect, really. I loved how Savvanah said, "I'll let you be Ken this time." Mostly because that means he was prohibited from being Ken at some point.
Violet is delightful, and a little crazy. I like it.
Moreover, I adored the awkwardness and embraced it. It was just adorable. And the way you described Violet was very sophisticated.
I think that is how I will classify your writing from here on.
Sophisticated Adorableness.
I think I will stop rambling about how much I enjoyed this now.
Author's response
Hahaha. Savannah. I liked how I wrote her. Kind of like, the annoying, yet adorable little sister. :]
Sophisticated adorableness? Haha. I like it.
I'm happy you liked it. I was actually afraid people might have not enjoyed it so much.
-shrug-
Thank you for the review!If The Clouds Were Singing A Song.
(#) xoconverse 2009-01-03
this update was just what I needed.
seriously. I saw it, and freaked out.
Then, I freaked out again because it was that good.
It wasn't that surprising though, your writing is always mindblowing.
Anyway, you described Ryan and his situation so well. I already am in love with Violet, by the way. She seems funny. So does Savannah.
needless to say, I love it.(:Author's response
You are the sweetest person ever. Seriously. I always love it when you give me such delightful reviews. You happen to be one of my favorite reviewers. :]
Ah, Violet. I believe I will enjoy writing her character throughout future chapters. Especailly Savannah. ;]
Well, thank you for the review!If The Clouds Were Singing A Song.
(#) smilin_tj 2009-01-04
Love love love it. Excited for the next installment. Your descriptiveness make me jealous that I can't write, in much the same way that anyone playing an instument and managing to create music rather than noise also makes me jealous. These things I cannot do to save my life and I truly admire those who can. We all love your stories. They're some of the best on here.
PS I love how you write Ryan, the only thing that sucks is he and Violet will part ways. I'm already saddened by it =[Author's response
Awhhh. This review made me smile, from ear to ear. No lie. :]
I'm really excited for the new story as well, and that people actually enjoy it. It makes me feel all fuzzy inside.
Thank you for the reivew!If The Clouds Were Singing A Song.
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-01-04
Wow.
You're very discriptive and I love every word typed.
It's really good, although I was annoyed at one thing.
There's only two chapters.
=] Can't wait for you to add.
xoxo,
BAuthor's response
Awh. Thanks!
I'm glad you like it enough to be annoyed that there's only two chapters. ;]
But I'm not sure if an update will be posted soon. Winter Break ends tomorrow, and I'm not quite sure if I'll have enough time on the weekdays. If I do, I'll try my best to write some. But, if not, that'll just leave me weekends to update. But, this weekend, I might not have time, either. Beacause my friend's best friend is coming down here and wants to meet me, so we all are gonna hang on.... Saturday?
But, I'll try my best to get a new chapter in the works. I'm really excited that people like it already and have gotten such great feedback. I only hope to get more with later updates. I'm also very excited to see how it turns out and the reactions of my readers throughout future chapters. I think this story is going to be a good one. :]
Thank you for the review!If The Clouds Were Singing A Song.
(#) TheBestFrigginShoes 2009-01-05
I really like this and I'm excited to find out what's going to happen. You're a really good writer- please update soon!Author's response
Thanks! I'll try to update as soon as I find time! :]
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