(#) Fantasy_Fairy 2009-01-07I smell potential! :D
The introduction was really good. Those nuns really are carrying out God's word alright. I wonder how no-one will find them and rescue them from the orphanage - like family? Their grandmother? It would to freaky for the Frerard to begin at such an early age.....o.0
More soon ;D
(#) Emo_musik_chick 2009-01-14How you don't see your own awesome amazingness is beyond me. That was beautifully written, and unbelievably sweet. I cried at Gerard's innocent, naive, seven-year-old telling of such an awful story, but this is just so well done that I couldn't stop reading. Can't wait for more.
- You gonna update? Come on don't leave your fans hangin. I'm one of them and this story is so sweet. I was about to cry at when the nuns were about to hit Mikey. I know that sounds cheesy, but I really like this story. Please update, soon. I'm begging you!!!!!!!!!!!!
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