(#) kujanomiko 2006-05-06There were a few things I didn't agree with in this story, most notably some of the cruder things in Zidane's letter (seemed a bit out of canon), but I would like to reassure you that your Freya characterization was good. I was afraid at first that she was too domestic and docile, but you proved that she still has spine and can't be tied down too easily. I enjoyed this fic. :)
Author's responseYeah, I went out on a limb with Zidane's character here, so not everyone's bound to agree with it. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic anyway! Yep, in the end nothin's gonna hold Freya back--she's a free spirit.
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