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Cats and Robbers
6 reviewsHow does searching for a cat lead a bungling detective into solving a high profile crime? Only Victor Callaway knows.
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Cats and Robbers
(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-23
I see this was probably formatted for another archive. It's within legible bounds, but not my favorite.
The first few sentences could stand to share a paragraph. It would make the "Victor Callaway at your service" one-liner stand out more.
More later.Cats and Robbers
(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-24
A flamethrower in the wallet? Intriguing.
Author\'s Response: Throwaway line, that one. I couldn't think of a way to use it without resorting to slapstick... not that I'm averse to slapstick as this work shows.Cats and Robbers
(#) hobbeth 2006-06-10
He has got to be the most clueless detective in the annals of history. And the luckiest.
Good story; well written.Cats and Robbers
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-03
Hey good story although a bit cliche. Ditective that doesn't know what he's doing happens to stumble into a big heist or murder or kidnapping. Good imagery though. A few spelling mistakes but still good.
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