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Folie A Deux
(#) isophoren 2009-04-20
I like the style of writing that you have. So many authors tend to go on and on (and on) with unnecessary details and adjectives. Having said that your stories could use some metaphor and simile. But the ambiance was stronger than any weak point so, +1!
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