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Give Up Tonight

by xxTragic 4 reviews

My attempt at poetry...

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Published: 2009-01-23 - Updated: 2009-01-23 - 122 words - Complete

"Give Up Tonight"

Can't you tell
that pain is there?
I'm not doing very well,
and I know that you don't care.

I know I'm not worth much.
Let's just pretend that you can see
all this mess inside my head;
It's slowly killing me.

I've never been good at life,
even though I've always tried.
I'm sick of never giving up.
I should've just tried suicide.

I'm sorry I'm in your way,
but I won't break down and cry.
Today wasn't a very good day to live,
but tonight should be a beautiful night to die.

Meh... I'm not too good at poetry, but it's a try, right? Just let me know if I should stick to writing stories...
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