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• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) zicou 2009-01-30

  Great, continue!
  Z.

• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) TenshiShouten 2009-01-30

  You need to work on your grammar and spelling, other then that it is good.
  
  And it's not St. Mongo's! It's St. Mungo's. Next time get your facts straight.

• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) anakhuskerfan 2009-01-30

  Good story so far can'w wait to read more. Is this going to be a Harry/Luna/Hermione fic?

• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) lancelot47 2009-02-01

  Hello dennisud,
  
  I agree it is a pain to post here.:)
  I am afraid I agree with Tenshishouten you need someone to beta.
  
  I'm not too clear on what happened with Hermione/Ron. Hope it got no farther than kissing/hugging.
  
  And what is this prank you speak of?
  
  I'll tune in for next chapter
  Lancelot47
  

  Author's response

  Have a beta for chapter 4 which is up!
  Thanks for the review!

• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2009-02-01

  Harry should date and later marry both Hermione & Luna.
  
  As Xenophillus Lovegood is near muggle in power, he should start a muggle newpaper.

• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) Cateagle 2009-02-01

  Good story so far and I'm looking forward to more. Ron seems to have messed up most spectacularly with Hermione and I suspect that's going to cement a H/L/Hr relationship quicker than would normally be the case. I suspect Ron is not going to find any friends among this trio for a fair while since he's managed to do plenty to tick off each of them.
  
  

• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) seebaer525 2009-06-01

  I agree that the story is good. Too bad it seems to be abandoned, I would have liked to keep reading.

  Author's response

  Nope NOT abandonded just my muse having a cluster F**k!

• The Wizard's Triad

  (#) bgoldnyxnet 2010-07-24

  I won't give this a -1 Illiterate, but really the spelling and grammar are painful. There are misspellings that would be found if you simply pasted the text into Word with spell checking turned on. Also incomplete sentences, which again would be found with Grammar checking.
  
  You also need to pay attention to continuity. In chapter 3 the letter from Gringotts refers to "Severus Octavian Snape", while in Chapter 4 he calls himself "Severus Tobias Snape".
  
  The plot is interesting enough to keep me reading though.
  

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