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The Unrequited Dream
(#) girlinthemoon 2009-02-15
Yay!!! An update!! It’s about time.
I’m really glad you didn’t abandon this story.
Very good chapter. I think it’s interesting that Taylor is so fascinated with Lea, and he thinks she doesn’t notice him. I bet she does. But she just doesn’t think he would ever notice her. Or maybe I’m wrong. But then you’ll have to prove me wrong and post the next part.
Please don’t make me wait another year before you update again! Please!!!!
The Unrequited Dream
(#) sunlizard 2009-03-14
liked the intensity of the first chapter, and while it isn't so strong here there remains enough of a whisper to sustain the atmosphere created.
also liked the thrownaway passing explanation for her 'different kind of beauty', letting the reader know why she's different but emphasising that its the last thing on her admirer's mind.
will follow updates with great interest :-)
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