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Battered Hearts
5 reviewsTen years post-Hogwarts, Ginny and Ron have been murdered, and Hermione is the prime suspect.
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Battered Hearts
(#) zicou 2009-01-28
Too short, but sounds great!
Continue,
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I'm tweaking the chapters as I go along, some will be a bit longer.
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(#) Cateagle 2009-01-28
Okay, I remember this one and it's a good one. If she can't continue it, I'm glad you are. One question, though, isn't it "Kreacher" and not "Kreature"? Other than that, it's a good introductory chapter that grabs the reader by the collar and drags them in.Author's response
Like I said, it was the cookies, warm, soft, melt in your mouth oatmeal cashew raisin cookies.
Good call on the spelling, Kreacher it is!
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(#) jjracer24 2009-01-29
Well, I'm glad if she wasn't able to continue the story that at least she could convince you to. I look forward to seeing what you do with the rewrite. Wish Guitargurl the best of luck and we hope to see her writing again when possible.Author's response
Thank you for the encouraging words, I'll try to nudge GuitarGurl back into writing - maybe play on her Catholic guilt. . .
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(#) JaCeeisme 2009-04-08
My biggest complaint about this story is that they are treating the deaths of Ron and Ginny as a crime. So far, I like the action of the first capter and look forward to more.
I wish GuitarGurl nothing but the best and hope her life straightens out to her liking. If it includes writing, great, but if it doesn't, I just hope she is happy.Author's response
Thax for reading and reviewing.
Two people have been violently killed, so the assumption is that they were both murdered.
Guitar Gurl reads the reviews and I know she'll be warmed by your concern.
It's been a few months and we keep in touch. She may start writing again but has made it clear the Battered Hearts is mine to finish.
I'll do my best.
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(#) MonCappy 2009-05-02
You misspelled Kreacher in the conversation between Harry and Hermione.Author's response
Hmmmm, I did miss that.
I'll try to edit it,
thanx.
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