Things come to ahead, questions must be answered. A bit of violence in this one
(#) DrT 2009-02-16
Looking forward to the next chapter; and I really hope Dumbles is punished!
I can't comment on your livejournal anymore, but I'm glad to see you putting this up. Good stuff.
Tch, Albus, you really do need to do your research better; all you did was make a bloody fool of yourself. I suspect Amelia is going to go after him for everything she can after this debacle. Meanwhile, Harry and Severus will obviously come out smelling like roses and I suspect there may soon be a change of management at Hogwarts. It should be quite interesting to see how you wrap this one up.
This chapter is exactly why you are among my favorite authors. The characters are believable, the scenes simply flow, the word usage is perfect. You describe each scene vividly, without unbalancing the story. I love your work.
Terrific update: the combat scene was exciting, and the confrontation with Amelia Bones and AD was perfect. I love your work.
(#) yo24 2009-07-26
Hi, I noticed that you said next chapter was the end of the story - but then you never updated it. This is a wonderful story - please update it soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next :D
I agree with yo24. I found this to be a wonderful story, but clearly unfinished. I would hope that you would eventually finish it.
Love the story, really wish that you had finished it. Dumbles should be retired... I would love to see what happens to Malfoy, will he rethink his desired allegiance to the dork lord?
Wow! Excellent story! Please post the ending soon!
I think you broke the record. Closest to finishing a story before abandoning it. It is a good story but you were so close!!!
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