- I rather liked the way Ron got it in the original, as well as the way they got access to Riddle Manor in that version, but this one is still enjoyable. I do wonder how long it'll take Albus to identify Harry as Mortis? It's an enjoyable story and I'm looking forward to seeing how the last bit gets tweaked.
- This is an instance where I think a sequel is not a very good idea. Why? You had a story. You told it. (And very well, I might add!)
In other words, why mess with a good thing?
I am looking forwards to the last chapter and I hope your muse drives you crazy with good ideas!
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