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It's Just the Hardest Part of Living
1 reviewPretty much based off the song"The Jetset Life Is Gonna Kill You"Gerard is a killer and he does everything because the woman he loves tells him too.He lost his memory and now its slowly coming back...
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It's Just the Hardest Part of Living
(#) Fantasy_Fairy 2009-03-01
Well, i really like the concept of the story. The only thing is that i can't really take your story seriously because of your grammar; you need to leave two spaces at the start of every sentence and not use words like "wtf". Sorry if that sounds condascending, but its true.
I hope you take that on board.
Cant wait for your next chapter :)Author's response
Thanks for the review and thanks for telling me that! I'm just not that good at the whole writing thing....Well I'll try my best to make things better!
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